Magnolia's morning began with the clang of shift-bells reverberating through the corrugated corridors of Deck 47. She rolled off the bunk, boots already laced.
The assembly hall smelled of hot metal and burnt lubricant. Conveyor belts rattled overhead, spitting out half-finished canisters and alloy plating destined for the City of Ascension above. Her job was simple, mind-numbing: rivet and seal, test the weld, shove the piece to the next station. Twelve seconds per unit, or the red light above her lane flashed and deductions came out of rations.
Sparks snapped as her pneumatic riveter bit into a steel collar. One, two, release, slide the cylinder on. Hammer the latch. Shove it forward. Another. And another.
The collar slipped from Jao's grip and struck the floor with a sound like a bell tolling. The alarm followed a heartbeat later, its shrill chirp cutting through the rumble of conveyor belts and the hiss of pneumatic tools. Heads turned along the line—brief, furtive glances before turning back to their work. No one could afford to watch for long.
The foreman emerged from the supervisory platform at the hall's far end, descending the metal stairs with the measured pace of a man who understood that urgency was beneath him. His coat was grey and spotless, pressed sharp at the shoulders, utterly untouched by the grime that coated everything else in the assembly hall. He carried his ledger like a priest carrying scripture, and when he reached Jao's station he did not speak. He simply consulted the badge pinned to the boy's chest, found the corresponding line in his book, and made a small mark with his stylus.
Magnolia kept her hands moving. Seat the collar, test the weld, hammer the latch home. The riveter kicked against her palms with each burst, throwing sparks that died against her gloves. Her shoulders ached with the deep, grinding pain of hours spent in the same position, but she had learned to work through worse.
Above the factory floor, the propaganda screens cast their perpetual glow. Holograms of the City of Ascension rotated through the haze. A pre-recorded voice urged the workers below to strive with gratitude, to remember that the only reason they were allowed to exist was due to the mercies of the Ascended. Someone down the line made a sound in their throat. Magnolia thought it might have been her.
* * *
The dorm was a low-ceilinged concrete husk, rows of narrow bunks stacked three high. A few workers had strung up ragged cloth to claim a shred of privacy, but most had given up pretending.
Magnolia's bunk was near the end, next to a flickering overhead bulb that buzzed like an angry insect. She didn't bother greeting the others. Faces changed too often. One day they snored across from you; the next, their bed was empty and no one asked why.
She stepped over a woman sobbing softly into a blanket and slipped into her bunk. From beneath her pillow, she pulled her most precious thing: a battered, water-stained journal.
She didn’t write about dreams of freedom or revenge. Those were childish and dangerous. Instead, she wrote about small things: the exact color of the rain that day, a weird shape she saw in the scrap pile, the taste of a rare piece of candy someone smuggled in.
And sometimes, in the hours before dawn, she'd write about how life would be if she were someone else. Not just a different circumstance—a different her. She'd imagine peeling off her own skin like a work uniform, stepping out of Magnolia entirely and into someone new. A merchant's daughter with soft hands. A pilot who'd never touched a rivet gun. A woman whose mother still lived.
The fantasy was shameful, somehow. Like wishing yourself dead without the honesty of saying so.
Her mother used to tell her to "keep your thoughts close and your eyes down," before the foremen dragged her away one night for god knows what. Magnolia didn’t know her father. He was just a blank on every record, a ghost even.
The quiet did not trouble her, she had learned to find safety in it. Her journal held the only words she trusted.
* * *
Morning came without bells. Day off, the single mercy built into the six-day grind. Management called it "rest rotation”. Though Magnolia wondered why they’d go through the trouble of making it sound fancier than what it actually was.
Magnolia descended into the market district, a sprawling maze of covered alleys lined with tarps and makeshift stalls. Bright scraps of cloth fluttered overhead. Broken neon signs flickered without purpose.
Vendors called out their wares in voices hoarse from repetition. "Boot soles, good rubber, fits most sizes!" "Sewing needles, full set!" One stall offered bars of soap stacked in careful pyramids; another displayed work gloves with reinforced palms, only slightly worn at the fingertips. A woman sorted through bins of mismatched buttons and zippers while her husband sharpened scissors for a discount.
All of it had been discarded by the Ascended City. They were functional but unfashionable, serviceable but last season's stock.
She drifted past a stand selling cracked porcelain dolls, their glass eyes staring blankly. There was something almost enviable about them. Faces you could swap out. Heads you could unscrew and replace with something prettier.
She caught her own reflection in a cracked mirror: hollow cheeks, tired eyes, a mouth that had forgotten how to smile without irony. What would it be like to just... take that off?
She shook the thought away and kept moving.
At the far edge of the market, where shadows pooled between support pylons, she saw him.
Slender. Dark-haired. A bit too clean for the Satellite. He didn't haggle or buy. He simply watched, eyes wandering over people as though trying to see something beneath their skin.
Their eyes met. Magnolia, on a whim, offered him a small, crooked smile.
His stare broke; he looked down as if embarrassed, the tips of his ears flushing.
Cute, she thought. In a stray-cat way. If stray cats stared holes through you.
She let her gaze drift past the stalls, cataloguing without seeming to. Three Watchmen at the alley mouth, white uniforms standing out against the rust-eaten walls. Another pair near the water pump, pretending to check whatever was written on their clipboard. A fifth leaning against a support beam two levels up, watching the crowd with the studied boredom of a man being paid to look relaxed.
More every week. She'd started counting.
It’d been ten years since that thing had torn through the sky. But the Watchmen had tripled within a month, and they hadn't thinned since.
Lately, though, even that new normal had shifted. The patrols moved tighter now, quicker. Eyes lingered longer.
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Magnolia had heard the whispers in the place that she lived in: a hijacked airship, Satellrites slipping through the clouds and into the City above. She didn't know if it was true. Perhaps that was why the surveillance increased.
She moved on, buying nothing, pockets as light as when she’d arrived.
* * *
By dusk the market had thinned.
She heard the footsteps behind her before she saw anything. Soft at first. Then quickening.
She stopped, didn't bother turning. "All right. You're really gonna do this tonight?" She slipped her hand inside her coat, fingers brushing the short pry-bar she kept for emergencies. "Fair warning—I'm ranked number one at street fights in my dorm. Ask anybody."
Silence. Then measured steps.
The boy from the market emerged from the shadows, hands lifted in awkward surrender.
"You again?" Her tension eased to annoyance. "If you're following me, there are better ways to say hello."
He stepped under a failing light fixture. Shadows flickered across sharp cheekbones, a mouth set in cautious lines. "Sorry. I needed to make sure no one else was around."
"That's not creepy at all." She kept her stance firm. "What do you want?"
He drew something from his coat.It was something that looked like a syringe.
"Back off." She raised her hand. "I don't do drugs."
"It isn't a drug." He took a careful step closer. "It's an awakening agent. With this, you will have the power of the Ascended."
She laughed, "Power in a syringe? You've got bedtime stories mixed up, friend."
"It's real." His voice was soft, unhurried. "You've often wondered how your life could go on like this. Wouldn't you trade a needle's sting for a way out?"
For a moment, a tiny flame of longing flickered: to leap like an Ascended, to conjure flames and ice with a thought. Then the absurdity crushed it.
"You'd have an easier time tricking my mother. Unfortunately, I'm not that gullible."
He looked at her almost gently. "Your father worked smuggling routes until he vanished in a tunnel collapse. He impregnated your mother but left because he was a criminal. ”
Her breath hitched. "Who told you that?"
"No one." He touched two fingers to his temple. "I see things. I'm the All-Knowing."
As he spoke, his irises brightened, violet spreading like ink dropped in water, galaxies threading tiny spirals in the depth of his eyes.
Magnolia's back pressed against the wall. "W-What's wrong with your eyes?"
The boy let out a quiet laugh. "You won't believe me until the power lives under your own skin."
"I'm walking." She pushed past him.
She'd taken barely two steps when a windless hush brushed her ear, he was behind her, impossibly sudden. The prick of metal found her elbow. Pain bloomed; she yelped, swinging the pry-bar blindly. He vanished out of reach, needle withdrawn.
"What—are—you—" She clutched her arm; warmth seeped under the sleeve.
"In two days," he said steadily, "you will face a great catastrophe. In those hours, you'll awaken. Then you will find your way back to me."
She glared, pulse hammering. "If this kills me—"
"You'll get yourself killed if you stay the way you are." He stepped back, shadows swallowing half his face. "I gave you a way out, Magnolia. Whether you believe me is up to you."
"Creep." Hatred and fear interlaced her voice. "I thought you were cute. Turns out you're a lunatic."
Yet even as she cursed, her arm tingled. Beneath the skin, something warm unfurled.
The boy inclined his head, that eerie amethyst gaze flickering like twin nebulae. "Remember: two days."
Then, with a sound like paper folding, he darted into darkness so fluidly she doubted he'd ever stood there at all.
* * *
The next morning, Magnolia woke in a sweat. Her elbow throbbed. Swollen, hot to the touch. A deep, raw ache had settled there like a guest who refused to leave.
"Power of the Ascended, my ass."
Her phone buzzed. A notification pinged on the cracked screen:
[Reassignment Notice]
You have been selected for Civic Beautification Duty.
Report to Maintenance Gate 12-C at 0900.
One of the Ascended houses, Jhael, was visiting the Satellite. Some highblood snobs descending from their holy land to smile for the cameras. They'd plant a water pipe, cut a ribbon, and call it a miracle.
And then they'd leave. Back to their merry life above this hell.
She downed two bitter pills of expired cold medicine and headed out.
By midmorning, she was stringing up crimson banners embroidered with the dark octopus sigil of House Jhael, her elbow screaming at every motion. Her forehead burned. Her neck was damp with sweat.
Two days from now... catastrophe. You'll awaken.
"Awaken to what?" she muttered. "A migraine?"
But she couldn't shake the feeling in her gut.
* * *
The nobles came dressed for a pageant. Ceremonial armor chased with filigree, robes threaded with crystals that shattered the weak Satellite light into a thousand false colors. Their guards were statues carved from silvered plate. Theater, all of it.
One of them drew a hush from the crowd just by existing. Brown hair, eyes the impossible blue of the sky, cheekbones sharp enough to draw blood. The Satellite sighed for him—a soft intake of breath, a murmur, a swoon.
His gaze slid over faces the way a knife slid over soft fruit. Then it hooked.
On her.
He smirked, slow and knowing, as if he'd found a private joke in the grime. Magnolia looked away, fixed her eyes on the cracked decking at her feet.
By afternoon the nobles were lifting off, and the plaza was a confetti graveyard. Magnolia swept broken poles and soaked banners, head pounding, arm throbbing.
A shadow fell across her hands.
The blue-eyed boy. Closer than decency allowed.
"Forgive the intrusion." His voice was smooth as polished stone. "I don't believe we've been introduced."
"We haven't. Let's keep it that way."
He laughed, delighted with himself. "Bold. I like bold. Loric Jhael. Fourth scion, though my mother likes to put 'heir' in front."
"Good for her. You're standing on my trash pile."
He stepped closer. "You're not like the rest. They gaped. You yawned. They fawned. You scowled." His eyes flicked to her swollen elbow. "You're ill. That's unfortunate. You're pretty, even when you're flushed."
She shifted to move past him. He shifted too, blocking. The wall was suddenly at her back. His arm slid up, bracing beside her head; the other hand caught her wrist.
"Don't," he said lightly. "You'll only bruise yourself."
"I'll scream."
He captured her other wrist, pinned both above her head with one hand. The other palm covered her mouth. "Shh. No need for drama. We're only talking."
Heat surged under her skin: anger, fever, the unnatural thrum in her elbow. She drove her knee up. Hard.
Loric sucked air between his teeth. His grip loosened—the smallest fraction—but it was all she needed. Magnolia twisted, dropping her weight, wrenching one wrist free.
"Touch me again and I'll rip those eyes out and sell them for scrap."
For a heartbeat, rage transformed his face into something truer. Ugly, petulant, like a child denied a toy. Then the court smile slid back into place.
"You kick like a mule. I did say I liked bold."
He lifted his hand, forming thumb and forefinger into the shape of a pistol.
"Come, Kraken."
Space responded as a seam that appeared in the air, neat as a slit in silk. Out of it, slow at first, then with hungry haste, unfurled a coil of shimmering black flesh, burnished as if sculpted from pitch-dark coral.
They shot out at her before she could even react. One tendon-thick limb lashed about her waist, cinching so tight she thought she was going to be cut in half. Another coiled her arms, drawing them upward and outward, cruciform, while a third slid across her mouth, silencing sound before sound reached air.
Pressure built upon pressure. Her ribs bent inward, seeking unacceptable shapes. Breath scissored, came shallow, then shallower, lost in the storm of tightening flesh.
Loric stepped closer. “Sweet dreams,” he said.
Then there was nothing but darkness.

