Hey all.

  I'm sitting down and reworking on book 2. Sadly the mental state I was in when I wrote book 1 and the mental state when I wrote book 2 were two totally different things. Beyond some medical stuff as well as the chemical changes from medicine my doctor had prescribed, I tried to juggle 6+ stories and ended up messing up more than I succeeded.

  As such i'm sitting down and going through book 2 again, doing whatever I need to do in order to fix the shortcomings from book 2.

  Taken from Royal Road, this narrative should be reported if found on Amazon.

  So this is where I reach out to you and ask if you're willing to share with me in this post the things that stands out the most and need fixing. I want to get it right and I have no problem admitting that I bit off more than I could chew.

  I've made a bunch of changes in my personal life. From blood tests, new medication, exercise, a little meditation, and more.

  I'm back to writing and doing what I love.

  So if you're willing, post what you think needs to be fixed for book 2. I'll check back in a few days, comment and then periodically check back in and update things.

  Thanks again to everyone willing to help.